Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Bachpan ka pyar

pyar kiya pyar kiya pyar kiya

humne bhi tha kisi se pyar kiya

wo pyar kya tha, tha apna dil de diya

raaton ka karar neendon ko nisar kiya

bas jo kiya ,wo aanken char or yaad hazar kiya

uski yadon me apne ko behar kiya

jabse tha unka deedar kiya,tabse hoshon se tha deewar kiya

par humara kya tha humne to tha pyar se pyar kiya

na kabhi doston me na sathiyon me apne is lagan ka izhar kiya

bas apne dil ki awaz pe dhadkanon ko bauchar kiya

ek din hosla kar ke humne unse ikrar kiya

par unka kya tha unhone to inkar kiya

duniya ko lagta hai usne humse israr kiya

par humne to tha unse pyar kiya

dil rota hai aankhen fat-ti hain sansen jhukti hain

kyun humne bhi tha kisi se pyar kiya

pyar kiya pyar kiya pyar kiya

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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 5, 2009 at 2:23 AM

    fantabulous penning dude wid uper lexican;-)
    way to go..thumbs up

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  2. HindulNovember 8, 2009 at 5:13 AM

    pehle angrezi mei, ab hindi mei...yaar aap to mahan ho....on a serious note, this piece of poetry is one of the best i've ever read...

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  3. AnonymousNovember 8, 2009 at 11:14 AM

    u've got troubles, I've got 'em 2. dere isn't anything I wouldn't do 4 you. v'll stick together 2 see it through cause u've got a friend in me."

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  4. dr.umangNovember 19, 2009 at 1:08 PM

    so ya want me to comment eh? :D


    wat if i say dat was a CRAP?!!lol

    niways its outta my head :( completely!!and kinda poor hindi hahaha ...buh niways niacee n lovelie efforts:P

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  5. dr.umangNovember 19, 2009 at 1:13 PM

    and btw ya had ben crazy high writing des poem wid ur rhyming skills kya??...LOL

    ya are my patient..and so i am calm (listening to ya psychobabbler)and relaxed ..

    *rolls eyes*

    wow :P kinni achi poem hai :x :|

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  6. AnonymousDecember 7, 2009 at 1:20 AM

    eh dat was nice hmmm wish it was for me hehe....

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  7. UnknownDecember 20, 2009 at 10:20 AM

    oooohh..bachpan ka pyar n ol dat :p..huh...


    i must say u r gud at expressing ur feelings..:P...wish i too can write dese kinda stuff..*sob**sob*........


    m jealous...lolx..

    nywyss keep it up ;)

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  8. UnknownJanuary 7, 2010 at 4:51 AM

    gud work mate !!!

    me waiting for more such...

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  9. UnknownJanuary 11, 2010 at 9:22 PM

    crap!!!!!!see m sry cudnt stop ma laughin...........dint really mean so...bt its funny fo i guess all othrs dan u!!!!
    i respct ur feelings........still it s a gud thng 2 b share in a lrge gp ,,vd u sayyin it all in dat senty cond .....n all d frns lik me laughin lik giants n gvng comments ........ise khte hain 'ghaav',,,,n phr ghaav pe 'namak'!!!!!!!! lol

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